高考英语作文复习点拨与演练.doc

高考英语作文复习点拨与演练

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题 型 解 读

命题重视“新材料、新情境”的创设与运用，考查考生的综合语言运用能力。新材料、新情景的创设与运用，主要体现在词汇和语法知识、完形填空、阅读理解、阅读表达等题目的选材上，这些题目应注重选取贴近考生、贴近生活、新颖的、时代感强的材料。高考英语写作题的主题最好涉及与每个考生密切相关的内容，这样可以引导考生思考现实问题，使每个考生均有内容可写，充分发挥自己的水平，展示其英语写作能力，而不是单纯地为了写作而写作。

应试技巧点拨

1. 首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2. 列题纲使要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。

3. 勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。 4. 要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。

5. 遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6. 注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7. 注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚。书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8. 最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

总之，要心有全局。英文写作如果结构意识良好，应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了，适当地填入观点、素材，文章就自然而然立起来了。临考在即，同学们要牢记英语写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语；书信、通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。 英语作文写作“四步走”

由于时间限制，高考时一般在15分钟左右必须完成英语作文。高考的英语作文步骤如下：

1. 作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

2. 考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。 3. 边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。

4. 写完后一定要再细看一遍。 最后冲刺阶段的英语写作

1. 重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用（on

the other hand, however, furthermore）、作者的表达方式（词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用）、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。

2. 在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练

练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。

二

1. 阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。

自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商场、集贸市场等商品零售场所实行塑料购物袋 有偿使用制度，一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。请你结合自己的生活实际，自拟题目，谈谈 自己对该项规定的看法与建议。

参考答案：

Say “No” to Plastic Bags

Plastic bags will not be provided free in the supermarkets, department stores and other markets since June 1 st, 2008. customers need to pay for it. I’m in favor of this act.

In my view, the government is starting to attach importance to protecting the environment. It also reminds people to be aware of the responsibility to protect our environment.

As well all know, plastic bags make our shopping easy and convenient. However, it takes a very long time for them to break up. As a consequence, they can cause serious pollution, which does great harm to our surroundings. What’s worse, they can be mistakenly used in our daily life. Therefore, I strongly recommend that every one of us should take it seriously and try more recyclable bags, like paper ones when shopping to make our environment more friendly.

2.阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）

最近，山东省教育厅下重手整治全省中小学加班加点的现象。作为一名高三学生，请结合自己及身边的实际谈谈你对这一举措的认识。

Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays.

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参考答案： Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. For the first time in our senior middle school life my friends and I enjoyed a full-length winter vacation ,and for the first time in years we are free to do what is necessary and important to meet our personal needs .In the past years ,we kept working hard from morning till night in order to get a higher mark in the college entrance exam. We omitted everything (such as art classes ,social activities ,etc. )that did not have a direct relationship with that goal .Consequently ,many of us are weak both physically and mentally. Over 70 percent of my classmates are near-sighted … If the whole generation of us continue to live this way, what would the future of our nation be like?! I’d like to express my heartfelt thanks to our responsible government for its wise and timely decision to bring all that to an end.

3. 某英文网站正在开展关于 “是否取消黄金周”的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点提示, 用英语写一篇短文, 描述目前存在的两种看法, 并陈述你的观点, 以便向该网站投稿。 赞成取消的人认为： 1.给交通、旅游者安全和环境带来巨大的压力； 2．购票难； 3．服务质量下降 反对取消的人认为： 你的观点 1．消费需求得到满足； …… 2．促进旅游业和经济发展 注意：

1．词数：120~150字；

2．参考词汇：黄金周the Golden Week（或以the GW代替）

参考答案：

In recent days, a discussion is being carried on about whether the Golden Week should be

cancelled

Some people agreed to cancel the Golden Week. They pointed out that nationwide traveling has put big pressure on transportation, tourist safety and the environment. The Golden Week results in crowded scenic spots and packed hotels, making the quality of service decline.

However, other people argue the golden week has encouraged people to spend more during the seven-day holiday so it has brought huge profits to the nation’s tourism industry and promoted the economic growth.

Despite the fact that voices calling for its cancellation are becoming even stronger I still think people need to relax and common vacation time is very important. It should take into consideration not only incomes, but also the satisfaction of those who take the holiday. Opinions of those who object：

In my opinion, the current golden week might as well be canceled and we should readjust the nation’s public holidays. The new 1ist of public holidays may include important traditional festivals, such as the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival.

4.根据表格的内容，写一篇短文，介绍中西方饮食的不同，并发表自己的看法。字数在120~150之间。 中国饮食 食物类别 小麦、大米、豆类、蔬菜、少量鱼和肉 牛奶、糖、牛排、三明治、汉堡包 优点 是一个比较平衡的饮食；富含纤维；低糖、低脂肪 提高足够的能量 缺点 有时能量不足 一个不太合理的饮食；容易引起肥胖和疾病 西方饮食

参考答案：

As two different cultures ,there are several differences between Chinese and Western diets .Generally ,Chinese food is a fairly healthy diet. People in the south mainly eat rice ,while in the north people live on wheat ,beans and so on. Besides ,Chinese eat plenty of vegetables, together with a little meat and fish. The advantage of Chinese diet is that it is rich in fiber ,low in sugar and fat. The shortcoming is that it sometimes doesn’t provide enough energy. The Western diet has its own character .Western people live mainly on milk ,sugar and meat. Such foods as sandwiches ,hamburgers give high energy. The disadvantage is that it contains too much sugar and fat ,which can bring people some troubles like overweight or heart disease. What about combining the Chinese and Western diets together ?It must be an interesting

attempt.

5．据报道，目前我国居民每日使用塑料袋约30亿个，中国已成为白色污染大国。自今年6月1日起，全国的商品零售场所将不再免费提供塑料购物袋。请根据左侧的漫画，结合生活实际，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文，谈谈你对“限塑令”的看法。

参考答案：

It is reported that around three hundred million plastic bags are used by Chinese residents each day. As is known in the picture, the earth is crying for help because of this serious white pollution.

To our joy, all the shopping places will be banned from providing free plastic bags from June 1 this year. I can’t agree more to this. For a long time, though we have known the bad effects of plastic bags on our environment, still we find it difficult to refuse them --- they are so convenient to us. Thanks to the government, firm measures are to be taken to limit them. I am sure people will become accustomed to giving up the plastic bags. Only by changing the way we treat the earth can we form a harmonious relationship with it.

Saving the earth is saving ourselves. Stop using plastic bags. 6.为丰富学生生活，减轻学习压力，教育部要求中学生每天锻炼一小时，建议跳校园集体舞。家长对此有些担忧，怕影响学生学习。请你用英语写篇短文，谈谈你对此的看法。

词数: 120—150。

参考答案： A new demand from the Department of Education requires at least an hour’s exercise per day for middle school students ,suggesting having such activities as group dancing ,which aims to make the school life more colorful. But this leads to some worries from some parents .They wonder if group dancing will have some bad effect on young boys and girls ,causing small affairs like puppy love. As a student myself ,I have different idea from our parents .All things have two sides. Group dancing is really a healthy way of relaxation .Under proper guidance ,it is beneficial not only to build up our body ,but to strengthen the relationship among students.

What’s more ,trying to learn dancing refreshes our mind ,and makes our study more effective .So there is no need to worry about it .

7.阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。

近来，某书店生意不景气。假若你是店员，请你给店主写份报告，提出自己的建议，以吸引更多的年轻人来店购买书刊。

参考答案：

To attract young people to our bookstore, in the first place, we must supply them with interesting magazines and books. I suggest a poster outside announcing subjects of interest, such as music, films, video, football and so on.

Magazines should be sold at lower prices for the first-time customers. Once they come to the shop they will see other attractions.

Also advertise on the local media about discounts for young people on all books bought in the next month. Operate an exchange programme where they can trade old books for new ones at a special price. Reserve a youth section in the shop where books and magazines interesting to them

are on show. Invite them to come and sit in the comfortable chairs provided, to meet friends and look through books and magazines.

If we adopt proper strategies, young people will be attracted to our shop, and the sales will be on the rise.

8.有些父母对孩子过分呵护，他们不仅在家为孩子代劳一切，还接送他们上学，陪伴他们到校外辅导班上课，领他们去参加招工面试……请你写一篇120—150词的短文就此谈谈自己的看法。

参考答案：

Nowadays parents tend to care too much for their children. Besides doing everything at home for their children, they drive them to and from school, accompany them to various out-of-school classes, and, when the kids are older, take them to job interviews. It’s absolutely true that all that is done out of kindness. But I’m afraid our dear parents forget that, sooner or later, We’ll be grown-ups, or parents, just like them.

Rome wasn’t built in a day. It is a gradual process for us to change from children to mature adults. We should learn to make our own decisions and build up an independent mind. And it is equally important we try to manage our own life so as to be capable in the future. Leaning to care for others is another thing we must do. Only in this way can we eventually grow mature, physically, mentally, and morally.

9.孟详斌，解放军某部军官，山东齐河人，2007年11月30日在浙江金华为救跳水轻生女

子不幸牺牲，献出了年仅28岁的生命，他的事迹感动了全社会。 请以“Heroism in economic society ”为题用英语写一篇字数为120-150的短文，发表自己的看法。

Heroism in economic society

参考答案：

Heroism in economic society

Meng Xiangbin ,a 28-aged PLA man officer ,lost his life in saving a drowning girl ,His heroic behavior moved the whole society .through which we can see the crystal-clear heart of a hero ,I strongly feel that heroic spirit never fades .

Our society calls for heroism ,No dynasty in history can survive without heroes ,It is heroes who take the lead in fighting against criminals and set an example for the masses to follow ,They are the backbone of our nation who makes great contributions to human life .

Additionally heroism is a kind of virtue ,Financially speaking although a few people’s hearts are largely occupied by business and money ,heroism is deeply rooted at the bottom of our hearts ,So in time of danger ,many heroes will give their hands without hesitation .

In a word ,we should advocate the whole society to follow the example of Meng Xiangbin

10．为进一步实施素质教育（quality-oriented education），促进青少年全面健康发展，

山东省教育厅最近发布了一系列规定，要求所有学校“开全课程，减轻学生课业负担”。针对选一举措，有人赞成，有人反对。请你结台实际，用英语写一篇约120一150字的短文，谈谈你的观点。以便发表在某英文网站开辟的论坛上。

参考答案：

Recently a series of documents on carrying out quality-oriented education in schools have

been released by Shandong Education Department to meet the needs of curriculum changes and reform．

The requirement that all schools should offer all the courses issued by the Ministry of Education will help enrich our knowledge．The decision oil reducing the heavy burden of assignment for pupils and middle school students will free us from the heavy burden of endless homework．Therefore，we will have more time to develop our interests and special skills，and take part in social activities，which helps cultivate our creative spirit

Briefly．the new resolutions on quality-oriented education will surely create boundless space to enable every one of us to develop actively Thus，they cad lay a good foundation for our development and will also benefit our physical and mental health．