My Goals in the College Years

姓名：潘同学

学校：太原理工大学

分数：87

Overtheyears,collegewasverymuchapartofmychildhoodjustasanobjective.WhenIwasinadolescencestage,theonlythingIhadbeendoingislearningforattendingtocollege.Onedaybeforeoneyears,Iwaswanderingaroundthecollegecampus,however,Ifeltconfusedaboutthepurposeofthecollege.Now,IthinkIhavefoundtheanswer.Mygoalsinthecollegeyearsarenotveryambitiousbutsimpleandpractical.Firstofall,IwillexposemyselftovastfieldwhereI'mnotfamiliarwith.Meet,know,comprehendandevaluatenewknowledge,assembleandenrichmyself.Inaddition,Ihopemyselfmoremature.Myself-imagewillstopbeingabouthowIlookandwillbegintohowIfeel.Iwanttobeanindependentpersoninvariousaspects.Iwillhavecapabilityofindividualstotakecareofmyownaffairsandnotdependonmyparentsorothersexcessively.What'smore,Iexpecttogaingenuinefriendshipandgoodinterpersonalrelationship.Lastbutnotleast,thecollegehavegreatinfluenceonwhatIwillbe.IhopeIwillbeapersonwhoispatriotic,hardworking,honest,kind-heartedandwhobenefittosocietyandothers.Althrough,mygoalsinthecollegeyearsarenotwonderful,IwillendeavortoachievemygoalsandI'mendeavoringtodoit.

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